Hi David and partner Rachel,
To say it simple; that's a very good song you made!
I liked the story/narrative a lot, but most of all how it started.
And the song is just cool!
Somewhere in the back of my head I hoped that Rachel sang along with you in the chorusses. What a nice surprise that would be!
I hope your wish comes through and you make more songs together. It could be a wish from me...
Hans