Hi David and partner Rachel,

To say it simple; that's a very good song you made!
I liked the story/narrative a lot, but most of all how it started.
And the song is just cool!
Somewhere in the back of my head I hoped that Rachel sang along with you in the chorusses. What a nice surprise that would be!

I hope your wish comes through and you make more songs together. It could be a wish from me...

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130