Originally Posted By: floyd jane
B.D.,

An Astoundingly Good lyric. Powerful. Blew me away.

Excellent tracks. Good mix.

This has a kind of Adele-vibe to it. (She could take this to the top of the charts - for a long run)
Natalie sounds good, but at times she is "a bit too even". It is a lyric that deserves to be sung DRIPPING with emotion - I don't think Natalie pulls that off.

Would have like the chorus melody to go to a slightly different place (it has more of a "verse feel" than a "chorus feel".

Don't put too much thought into these "nits". I think this is an INCREDIBLE song.
The lyrics are truly STUNNING.

Truly sorry for the loss of your friend. A tragedy.

fj

Thanks, Floyd, for listening and for your feedback, especially on the lyrics, which are usually my weak point.
I agree with you on both "nits". Those are the comments I learn from

Now I just need to call Adele ... does anyone have her number?

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