I love it all!

It's got that classic country music sound.
You and Danny really wrote some good stories. It's got a conversational tone, tells the story while feeling natural, and has a "feel good" ending. My favorite line:
now isn't this better, they think we're togetherAnd of course, excellent heartfelt singing. Janice perfect here - as you said, a no brainer.
I like the way you snuck the drum in one bit at a time. Great arrangement.
As I said - I love it all.