Hi Folks.
Here is a tune I wrote a couple of months back. I messed up on a key change in the last chorus, but it was too late to turn back, so I recorded "as is". All constructive comments are always welcomed and thank you for giving this time.

I Am Learning


Lyrics:

Stranded on deserted island.
No place to hide, or run from yourself.
Whispers of sand, music of water,
But you keep burning fires, waiting for help.

I am learning to breathe like fish underwater,
Crawl like snake in the garden,
Fly like crow through the valley,
Hunt like lions and tigers.
I am hungry mosquito,
An old leatherback turtle,
A kitten-bandito,
Honey bee on a myrtle.

This world has (an) identity crisis,
Forgetting that life is priceless...
Don't put a tag on me, don't put a tag on me.
Don't make me paint my pride, or make me choose a side,
Or ride your wild tide while I am sleeping.

Do you remember the time when life seemed so easy?
Walking the thin line, flirting with death... listening to,
Whispers of sand, music of water,
but you keep burning bridges, calling for help.

I am learning to breathe like fish underwater....

Tech stuff:
Composition, lyrics, vocals - me.
BIAB:
1418:Bass, Electric, SouthernRock Ev16 085
3442:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm BritPsycFunky Ev16 100
3703:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking 90sAcRockSlowGroove Ev 090
3642:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm DublinPopSlowLowSteady Ev16 105
3928:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm AltRockFunkyGritLowChug Ev16 095
511:Guitar, Electric, Soloist Dire Ev 140
RD: Americana16thsSyncFred^1-a:QuarterHiHat,Snare , b:QuarterRide,Snare
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Synths of Kontakt, recorded in Cakewalk.