A cool one.
There are the occasional end of phrase note that bothered me - cadence & cascade always get to me.
Lyrically it's a good narrative but I kept getting bothered by the use of heart twice in a line...it shouldn't bother me but it does.
No one else has mentioned either of the above but since you're still in demo phase I figured I might as well mention them.
COOL song but oh how I loathe U2. My wife was an UNBERfan until Joshua tree so I was constantly drowning it them for years.


Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe