Hi,

This is a very promising song. Loved the piano intro and rich backing. Also the vocals are excellent.

Lyrics - a suggestion:
You seem to have one too many words in many of the lines which stops the flow and rhythm of the vocals.
- just a suggestion on a very good song.

Well done.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com