In a moment of forum confusion we reviewed this version before the earlier post.
So we’ll get to V1 albeit a backwards journey.
Update: We listened. Regarding the chaos or mellow vibe. Hmmmm ... reckon it depends on the mood of the listener.

We enjoyed them both.
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Your vocals are very good!
This has a Wilco vibe to it in lyric and sound - a good thing in our book.
So many good lines, for example:
“I gotta live my life in colors other than blood red.”
AND “But like a fragile sweater, I’m just pullin’ at the thread.”
Since DS made such a small contribution we won’t mention it.
Well maybe

Cool collab!
Sing more!
J&B