Hi Misha!
Firstly, you’re writing reggae so you’re already on a winner in my book. A really tasty combination of tracks you’ve selected there - that erhu outro solo adds a vibe that nicely supports the rest of the song. The drum-only last bar in the outro is cool too. Your vocal has a good range that keeps variety, from the high near falsetto to the very deep lows. Thanks for the summary regarding the Navajo proverb - very apt for today - didn’t mind the pronunciation because I wouldn’t know. I interpreted that proverb as “How do you convince a conspiracy theorist that there is no conspiracy?” Your lyrics are a good balance between saying something and ambiguity. Is there such a term as ‘literal ambiguity’?

Ray - I love the drone-like quality of the bass line (if my ears are hearing correctly), the almost line-cliche in the verses and also that distinctive higher note step-down departure in the outro. Good bass work that doesn’t detract from the rest of the band but you’d notice it’s absence if it wasn’t there.

A great song!

Andrew