Originally Posted by floyd jane
Ron & R.W.

Excellent use of BIAB Guitars.
Good BAND all around. Love those drums, too...
Solid production and mix.
The piano is tucked in perfectly.

COOL BGVs all over the place.
Nice vocal. Clean and clear. I thought they could use significantly more reverb (for this style music)

"The army tank is stuck upon the marble entrance steps
Outside the tank the bodies are charred like charcoal briquettes
Inside they suffocated from all the poisonous gas
Others in the distance were somehow turned right into glass"

Originality oozes from every pore.

on my 5th listen...
smile

fj

Floyd, THANK YOU for the listen and the nice review. Can't be responsible for side effect of long term exposure to this song. Be careful!

Those drums are NOT anything like what I usually think of in terms of percussive backing, but I settled into the rolling toms and now quite like them. Great point on the vox reverb. If I change anything it will be the vox levels and FX. I'll attribute and oozing originality to by brother's lyrics. Mom always like him better, and I can see why.

Ha!

DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
ASUS I9-12900K DAW, 32 GB RAM
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)