Let's see... if 2 negatives equal a positive, 4 should be twice as positive. And yes, this is positively a fine song. Good write with fun lyrics. (We can say they're fun cuz they're not directed to us. We are happy observers of the tongue-lashing someone else is getting.) Meaningful for sure. My favorite lines: "You check your notes before you talk right through me
Goes to show that you hardly even knew me"

Good backing band and mix. You said so well: "I liked the rawness and spontaneity of the take"


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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