Overall, the site is clean and navigation is quick and easy.

These comments concentrate on the Home page as that is what most readers will see.

I’m not too keen on the purple ‘Introduction’ – I would dispense with this altogether. It says The Skyline Band at the top of the page and I think all readers can work out for themselves that this page gives an introductory overview.

If you can, I would try to find a picture which shows you ‘in situ’. Preferably on stage, but if not, then at least in a studio and armed with some instruments. The comfy living room (comfy though it undoubtedly is) is not sending me the right message.

Also John, some of the language sounds like it is right out of a management handbook (authority, commitment…)

As an example, I would suggest:

“Emma has continued to develop her talent since then and now masters a wide variety of styles with energy and emotion, thrilling our audiences with her warmth and sincerity.”

in place of…

“Emma has moved on a lot since then and sings in a wide variety of styles with verve, emotion and authority, thrilling our audiences with her warmth and commitment.”

Oh, and I’m pretty sure its “Wishing on a Star” (no ‘I’m’)

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